Art battle By Aryan and Lars

When I was  8 years old in the Philippines I train  basketball every Friday with my cousin. My cousin sometimes  tell me that if I learn to shoot the ball  before 5 months  he will put me to their team and played for them. Every Friday I call my cousin because I really like to play basketball with him but sometimes my cousin don’t have time to play with me  because he have homework so I just train by myself. Last time my cousin said why do you always train basketball. I said did you remember that you said last time I can go to your team if I learnt shooting the ball in the basketball hoop I can go to your team remember.  Oh ya I remember keep training. OK I replied. 5 months later I learnt shooting the ball in the hoop and my cousin come to me and said wow Lars you've learnt shooting the ball in the hoop maybe next week you can go to my team and played basketball. I said to him thanks cousin you're the greatest cousin in the world I have ever have. After I said that he is the greatest cousin in the world. He said do you want to played another sport with me like volley ball. No sorry maybe when I grow sorry. My cousin said that’s OK.   

Knowledge C

Dad

Mum

Ginger the cat

Daughter

Comprehension B

Winked-Close and open one eye quickly .

Muttered-Say something in a low or barely audible voice.

Certainly-Used to emphasize the speaker's belief that what is said is true.

Sheepish- Feeling embarrassing.

Application A

I have blue shirt.

I have blue green pant’s.

I am holding a cat.

I have black eye brow.

I have black eye.

I have black hair.

Analysing B

Ginger the cat	Daughter
Ginger the cat don’t like water.	The daughter like water.

New Ideas C

When dad found that he have a cat cage he decided to not put Ginger in the SPCA because maybe he just want home. Every morning Ginger the cat always go to the front door to get some food. After getting a food  to their house  Ginger will play again. If it’s night time Ginger will go inside the cage and take a nap. Sometimes Ginger cannot sleep because some other cat still want to play. Last time Ginger tell to the other cat that he is tired but the other cut is still knocking.

Evaluation A

I rated this text 10 out of 10 because I think the story is goo

Knowledge C

Uncle Andy and the Flies

Comprehension C

Firstly Uncle Andy’s bought a singlet in army surplus store. After he bought the singlet in the army surplus store he start wearing it so he can be clean. The singlet made a useful pouch and it can keep him warm in winter night also if it’s summer heat it can keep him cool. The singlet is useful because it can carry a new laid egg.

Application A

I am big

I have a dog

I  wear a hat

I have brown eye brow

I bought a singlet in the store

I have Black and blue hair mix together

Analysing A

:)	:(	Other
Uncle Andy bought a new singlet.	The flies keep coming in Uncle andy singlet.	He can carry a new laid egg in his singlet.

New ideas C

When Uncle Andy was cooking fish he saw many flies coming from the door. So he stop cooking the fish. Uncle Andy was scared because he thought the flies will sucked his blood and after that he will die. Uncle Andy call 911 because of his scared. When 911 was talking to Uncle Andy he saw all the flies die because of the smoke from the fish. Uncle Andy was happy because all the fly die.

Evaluation A

I rated this text 8 out of 10 because  it’s kind of cool.