I am a student at in Uru Mฤnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello guys this week my group decided to make what is New Zealand flag. If you don't know who made the New Zealand flag you should check are slide to learnt more about the New Zealand Flag.
ใใใซใกใฏ Lars! I like your blog post about the New Zealand Flag, it's really cool. I have some feedback for you or you can call it feedforward, your blog post is cool but you could put more details about the flag or be more specific. anyway good job keep up the good work.
he did he wrote- Hello guys this week my group decided to make what is New Zealand flag. If you don't know who made the New Zealand flag you should check are slide to learnt more about the New Zealand Flag.
Hi Lars, I really liked your presentation about the New Zealand flag. I already saw facts in the first slide that I didn't even know about. I also liked the animation in your slide. But maybe next time you should explain it a little bit more. But anyways I really liked it, keep it up!
Hi Lars, I really Like your blog post on the New Zealand flag I really enjoy the front page of how many colours there were. I like the way you put so many Question and I could really learn a lot about the NZ flag but maybe next time you should add more colours to the other slides. :)
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ใใใซใกใฏ Lars! I like your blog post about the New Zealand Flag, it's really cool. I have some feedback for you or you can call it feedforward, your blog post is cool but you could put more details about the flag or be more specific. anyway good job keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteand you could've put a description on your blog post
ReplyDeletehe did he wrote-
DeleteHello guys this week my group decided to make what is New Zealand flag. If you don't know who made the New Zealand flag you should check are slide to learnt more about the New Zealand Flag.
Hope you enjoy it ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
Hello Skyler thank you for commenting on my blog I appreciate that. Also I really like how you told me that I need to put more description. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHi Lars, I really liked your presentation about the New Zealand flag. I already saw facts in the first slide that I didn't even know about. I also liked the animation in your slide. But maybe next time you should explain it a little bit more. But anyways I really liked it, keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHi Lars,
ReplyDeleteI really Like your blog post on the New Zealand flag I really enjoy the front page of how many colours there were. I like the way you put so many Question and I could really learn a lot about the NZ flag but maybe next time you should add more colours to the other slides. :)