I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Lars. I really liked your blog post about our sailing day. But I think you should put more information when leaving the school grounds. Like that you were very exited and maybe a little bit scared... But I really like you blog post, Keep it up!
Hello Lars, I liked post a lot, it has a lot of details too. The part that I really liked is where you even explained a plane coming over you, that was really cool. But maybe you could work on double checking your work before posting. You had some misspelled some words, especially on the third slide. Also you should put a introduction and a title too so I know what your post is about. But all in all your post was amazing.
Kia Ora Lars my name is Miguel, from Wigram Primary School. I like how you told us all about what happened on your trip, maybe next time reread your story to see if u have any mistakes like when you wrote "Felling".
Hey Lars remember me from last year,I really like the work that you have done I also liked that you got to go swim in the lake but I saw some words that didn't make sense to me.I still like what you have done and you always need to keep it up!!!!. SE ya
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Hi Lars. I really liked your blog post about our sailing day. But I think you should put more information when leaving the school grounds. Like that you were very exited and maybe a little bit scared... But I really like you blog post, Keep it up!
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ReplyDeleteI liked post a lot, it has a lot of details too. The part that I really liked is where you even explained a plane coming over you, that was really cool. But maybe you could work on double checking your work before posting. You had some misspelled some words, especially on the third slide. Also you should put a introduction and a title too so I know what your post is about. But all in all your post was amazing.
Kia Ora Lars my name is Miguel, from Wigram Primary School. I like how you told us all about what happened on your trip, maybe next time reread your story to see if u have any mistakes like when you wrote "Felling".
ReplyDeleteHey Lars remember me from last year,I really like the work that you have done I also liked that you got to go swim in the lake but I saw some words that didn't make sense to me.I still like what you have done and you always need to keep it up!!!!. SE ya
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