I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, November 29, 2017
When I was 8 years old in the Philippines I train basketball every Friday with my cousin. My cousin sometimes tell me that if I learn to shoot the ball before 5 months he will put me to their team and played for them. Every Friday I call my cousin because I really like to play basketball with him but sometimes my cousin don’t have time to play with me because he have homework so I just train by myself. Last time my cousin said why do you always train basketball. I said did you remember that you said last time I can go to your team if I learnt shooting the ball in the basketball hoop I can go to your team remember. Oh ya I remember keep training. OK I replied. 5 months later I learnt shooting the ball in the hoop and my cousin come to me and said wow Lars you've learnt shooting the ball in the hoop maybe next week you can go to my team and played basketball. I said to him thanks cousin you're the greatest cousin in the world I have ever have. After I said that he is the greatest cousin in the world. He said do you want to played another sport with me like volley ball. No sorry maybe when I grow sorry. My cousin said that’s OK.
Thursday, November 16, 2017
Knowledge C
Dad
Mum
Ginger the cat
Daughter
Comprehension B
Winked-Close and open one eye quickly .
Muttered-Say something in a low or barely audible voice.
Certainly-Used to emphasize the speaker's belief that what is said is true.
Sheepish- Feeling embarrassing. 
Application A
I have blue shirt.
I have blue green pant’s.
I am holding a cat.
I have black eye brow.
I have black eye.
I have black hair.
Analysing B
Ginger the cat
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Daughter
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Ginger the cat don’t like water.
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The daughter like water.
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New Ideas C
When dad found that he have a cat cage he decided to not put Ginger in the SPCA because maybe he just want home. Every morning Ginger the cat always go to the front door to get some food. After getting a food to their house Ginger will play again. If it’s night time Ginger will go inside the cage and take a nap. Sometimes Ginger cannot sleep because some other cat still want to play. Last time Ginger tell to the other cat that he is tired but the other cut is still knocking.
Evaluation A
I rated this text 10 out of 10 because I think the story is goo
Friday, November 10, 2017
Knowledge C
Uncle Andy and the Flies
Comprehension C
Firstly Uncle Andy’s bought a singlet in army surplus store. After he bought the singlet in the army surplus store he start wearing it so he can be clean. The singlet made a useful pouch and it can keep him warm in winter night also if it’s summer heat it can keep him cool. The singlet is useful because it can carry a new laid egg.
Application A
I am big
I have a dog
I wear a hat
I have brown eye brow
I bought a singlet in the store
I have Black and blue hair mix together
Analysing A
:)
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:(
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Other
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Uncle Andy bought a new singlet.
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The flies keep coming in Uncle andy singlet.
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He can carry a new laid egg in his singlet.
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New ideas C
When Uncle Andy was cooking fish he saw many flies coming from the door. So he stop cooking the fish. Uncle Andy was scared because he thought the flies will sucked his blood and after that he will die. Uncle Andy call 911 because of his scared. When 911 was talking to Uncle Andy he saw all the flies die because of the smoke from the fish. Uncle Andy was happy because all the fly die.
Evaluation A
I rated this text 8 out of 10 because it’s kind of cool.
Tuesday, October 24, 2017
The long walk
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Please make sure that you write your answers to the questions in FULL SENTENCES
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2. How far did she have to walk to be able to get some seafood? She walk in front of our place.
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3. Where did Nanny have to go when the bridge was built? She need to walk around in the other bay.
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4. Who is Moremore? Moremore is Guardian of the bay.
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5. How many times did Nanny see Moremore? Nanny see the Moremore ones.
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6. What did they hide in the flax and why? They hide the kete because it’s to heavy.
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7. Why did the pipi move again? The pipi move again because the water turn black and smelly.
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8. Where did Nanny go after this? Nanny walked over the hill to the town.
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9. Where did they live? They live in the town.
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10. Did they ever find the pipi again? They did not find the pipi again.
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Thursday, October 19, 2017
Tuesday, October 17, 2017
Just Busking
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Please make sure that you write your answers to the questions in FULL SENTENCES
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2. What does the crazy old country guy set up? He set up his ten-tonne amp.
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3. What does the world timidly mean? Timidly means a manner that show lack and encourage.
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4. What does Tau play? Tau play the guitar.
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5. What does his brother play? Tau brother play a drum.
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6. What is uncle wearing? Uncle is wearing a suit and a white shirt.
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7. Why do you think people busk? People busk because their happy.
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8. Where is Bob Marley from? Bob Marley is from the nine mile Jamaica.
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9. What happened to the man on the street? The man on the street must have die.
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10. What did the the children do when they realised something was wrong with the man on the street? They stop the music and runs into the jeans shop for help.
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