Knowledge C

Uncle Andy and the Flies

Comprehension C

Firstly Uncle Andy’s bought a singlet in army surplus store. After he bought the singlet in the army surplus store he start wearing it so he can be clean. The singlet made a useful pouch and it can keep him warm in winter night also if it’s summer heat it can keep him cool. The singlet is useful because it can carry a new laid egg.

Application A

I am big

I have a dog

I  wear a hat

I have brown eye brow

I bought a singlet in the store

I have Black and blue hair mix together

Analysing A

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Uncle Andy bought a new singlet.	The flies keep coming in Uncle andy singlet.	He can carry a new laid egg in his singlet.

New ideas C

When Uncle Andy was cooking fish he saw many flies coming from the door. So he stop cooking the fish. Uncle Andy was scared because he thought the flies will sucked his blood and after that he will die. Uncle Andy call 911 because of his scared. When 911 was talking to Uncle Andy he saw all the flies die because of the smoke from the fish. Uncle Andy was happy because all the fly die.

Evaluation A

I rated this text 8 out of 10 because  it’s kind of cool.